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The Fantasy Novelist’s Exam by David J. Parker December 8, 2012

Welcome Fellow Fantasy Writers!

So I didn’t write this post. This post was first published by David J. Parker (with additional material by Samuel Stoddard) on this website. Since it is awesome, I have decided to share it with you. Visit the RinkWorks Production website for more information.

So here goes…

“Ever since J.R.R. Tolkien and C.S. Lewis created the worlds of Middle Earth and Narnia, it seems like every windbag off the street thinks he can write great, original fantasy, too. The problem is that most of this “great, original fantasy” is actually poor, derivative fantasy. Frankly, we’re sick of it, so we’ve compiled a list of rip-off tip-offs in the form of an exam. We think anybody considering writing a fantasy novel should be required to take this exam first. Answering “yes” to any one question results in failure and means that the prospective novel should be abandoned at once.”

David J. Parker.

The Exam

  1. Does nothing happen in the first fifty pages?
  2. Is your main character a young farmhand with mysterious parentage?
  3. Is your main character the heir to the throne but doesn’t know it?
  4. Is your story about a young character who comes of age, gains great power, and defeats the supreme badguy?
  5. Is your story about a quest for a magical artifact that will save the world?
  6. How about one that will destroy it?
  7. Does your story revolve around an ancient prophecy about “The One” who will save the world and everybody and all the forces of good?
  8. Does your novel contain a character whose sole purpose is to show up at random plot points and dispense information?
  9. Does your novel contain a character that is really a god in disguise?
  10. Is the evil supreme badguy secretly the father of your main character?
  11. Is the king of your world a kindly king duped by an evil magician?
  12. Does “a forgetful wizard” describe any of the characters in your novel?
  13. How about “a powerful but slow and kind-hearted warrior”?
  14. How about “a wise, mystical sage who refuses to give away plot details for his own personal, mysterious reasons”?
  15. Do the female characters in your novel spend a lot of time worrying about how they look, especially when the male main character is around?
  16. Do any of your female characters exist solely to be captured and rescued?
  17. Do any of your female characters exist solely to embody feminist ideals?
  18. Would “a clumsy cooking wench more comfortable with a frying pan than a sword” aptly describe any of your female characters?
  19. Would “a fearless warrioress more comfortable with a sword than a frying pan” aptly describe any of your female characters?
  20. Is any character in your novel best described as “a dour dwarf”?
  21. How about “a half-elf torn between his human and elven heritage”?
  22. Did you make the elves and the dwarves great friends, just to be different?
  23. Does everybody under four feet tall exist solely for comic relief?
  24. Do you think that the only two uses for ships are fishing and piracy?
  25. Do you not know when the hay baler was invented?
  26. Did you draw a map for your novel which includes places named things like “The Blasted Lands” or “The Forest of Fear” or “The Desert of Desolation” or absolutely anything “of Doom”?
  27. Does your novel contain a prologue that is impossible to understand until you’ve read the entire book, if even then?
  28. Is this the first book in a planned trilogy?
  29. How about a quintet or a decalogue?
  30. Is your novel thicker than a New York City phone book?
  31. Did absolutely nothing happen in the previous book you wrote, yet you figure you’re still many sequels away from finishing your “story”?
  32. Are you writing prequels to your as-yet-unfinished series of books?
  33. Is your name Robert Jordan and you lied like a dog to get this far?
  34. Is your novel based on the adventures of your role-playing group?
  35. Does your novel contain characters transported from the real world to a fantasy realm?
  36. Do any of your main characters have apostrophes or dashes in their names?
  37. Do any of your main characters have names longer than three syllables?
  38. Do you see nothing wrong with having two characters from the same small isolated village being named “Tim Umber” and “Belthusalanthalus al’Grinsok”?
  39. Does your novel contain orcs, elves, dwarves, or halflings?
  40. How about “orken” or “dwerrows”?
  41. Do you have a race prefixed by “half-”?
  42. At any point in your novel, do the main characters take a shortcut through ancient dwarven mines?
  43. Do you write your battle scenes by playing them out in your favorite RPG?
  44. Have you done up game statistics for all of your main characters in your favorite RPG?
  45. Are you writing a work-for-hire for Wizards of the Coast?
  46. Do inns in your book exist solely so your main characters can have brawls?
  47. Do you think you know how feudalism worked but really don’t?
  48. Do your characters spend an inordinate amount of time journeying from place to place?
  49. Could one of your main characters tell the other characters something that would really help them in their quest but refuses to do so just so it won’t break the plot?
  50. Do any of the magic users in your novel cast spells easily identifiable as “fireball” or “lightning bolt”?
  51. Do you ever use the term “mana” in your novel?
  52. Do you ever use the term “plate mail” in your novel?
  53. Heaven help you, do you ever use the term “hit points” in your novel?
  54. Do you not realize how much gold actually weighs?
  55. Do you think horses can gallop all day long without rest?
  56. Does anybody in your novel fight for two hours straight in full plate armor, then ride a horse for four hours, then delicately make love to a willing barmaid all in the same day?
  57. Does your main character have a magic axe, hammer, spear, or other weapon that returns to him when he throws it?
  58. Does anybody in your novel ever stab anybody with a scimitar?
  59. Does anybody in your novel stab anybody straight through plate armor?
  60. Do you think swords weigh ten pounds or more? [info]
  61. Does your hero fall in love with an unattainable woman, whom he later attains?
  62. Does a large portion of the humor in your novel consist of puns?
  63. Is your hero able to withstand multiple blows from the fantasy equivalent of a ten pound sledge but is still threatened by a small woman with a dagger?
  64. Do you really think it frequently takes more than one arrow in the chest to kill a man?
  65. Do you not realize it takes hours to make a good stew, making it a poor choice for an “on the road” meal?
  66. Do you have nomadic barbarians living on the tundra and consuming barrels and barrels of mead?
  67. Do you think that “mead” is just a fancy name for “beer”?
  68. Does your story involve a number of different races, each of which has exactly one country, one ruler, and one religion?
  69. Is the best organized and most numerous group of people in your world the thieves’ guild?
  70. Does your main villain punish insignificant mistakes with death?
  71. Is your story about a crack team of warriors that take along a bard who is useless in a fight, though he plays a mean lute?
  72. Is “common” the official language of your world?
  73. Is the countryside in your novel littered with tombs and gravesites filled with ancient magical loot that nobody thought to steal centuries before?
  74. Is your book basically a rip-off of The Lord of the Rings?
  75. Read that question again and answer truthfully.

Hoping you enjoyed!

Feel free to leave a comment below…

Good Luck and Keep Writing!

EM

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5 Responses to “The Fantasy Novelist’s Exam by David J. Parker”

  1. The first time I read this post I congratulated myself on missing so many of the obvious cliches – or at least having something of an original spin on them. However between now and then someone did critique my WIP and commented “Nothing really happens for the first 50 pages.” Ouch. Now number one is down maybe I need to take a good hard look at the rest… Although I quite like the idea of sending my characters taking a shortcut through ancient dwarven mines… maybe I can work it in somewhere?

  2. EM Castellan Says:

    Well I’m guilty of #58: Somebody in my novel stabs someone with a scimitar. And here I was thinking this was the brightest idea ever, lol.

  3. This is a funny and important (and self-revealing) test to take. I like how #s 16 & 17 sit together.
    #47 Do you think you know how feudalism worked but really don’t? — This one draws out a bigger point: we should know our world–maybe not like a place we’ve grown up, but like a block/city/community/subculture we’ve adopted.

    However, there are some that are funny, but problematic:
    #39 Does your novel contain orcs, elves, dwarves, or halflings? — Dwarves and elves, if pre-Tolkien, are part of a genre. I think this one should be, “Has anyone ripped off Tolkien’s _____?” That’s the key question (even then, see below). Likewise, #35 Does your novel contain characters transported from the real world to a fantasy realm? — an actually genre beyond Lewis-Tolkien.
    #s 2 & 3 are orphan tales, which I think are absolutely essential to literature. I just hope they can be done well. Both my child characters have lost a parent, but neither are secret kings or queens. Both, however, have peculiar abilities, but that is my belief that children have abilities that, drawn out, could save the world.
    Similiarly, #4 Is your story about a young character who comes of age, gains great power, and defeats the supreme badguy? — I hope people don’t stop writing these books. What kind of world will it be if children aren’t trained to slay dragons?

    Now, the self-test:
    #70 Does your main villain punish insignificant mistakes with death? — I’m struggling with this now. Though I’ve seen people die for these things in every generation of humanity, I worry it will look contrived to a generation that has abolished capital punishment, or decided whatever illegal war we’ve begun is just too hard to finish properly.
    #9 Does your novel contain a character that is really a god in disguise? In a sense, all my characters are gods in disguise, but that has to do with the anthropological logic of the novel. We’ll see if people think it is realistic, but perhaps the one most “rip-off-ish” is that Death appears in my novel in many guises. But that is true to Death, I think.

    The crunch:
    I’m not sure if I pass. I mostly pass. But even if I do, I have intentionally drawn from motifs, figures, symbols, mythic elements, and even character tropes from other traditions. I’m writing High Fantasy, so if I pretended I wasn’t doing that, I’d be fooling myself.
    How does one balance writing within a tradition and ripping off a story? I hope I have done the former, but we’ll see what readers thing–if I can ever get it done.

    (okay, too long for a comment–I think I have to blog this!)

  4. Rachel O'Laughlin Says:

    #61… and I am quite aware that is no light sin. Everyone uses that. But everyone likes it! I’m so guilty.

  5. Rachel O'Laughlin Says:

    Reblogged this on Rachel O'Laughlin and commented:
    I was only guilty of one of these. (Guess which one?) So true, and really good for a laugh.


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